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Friday, 28 July 2017

WALT:add detail to our writing to make it more interesting.

Bean boozled challenge    27.7.2017     


This morning Whaea Raewyn bean boozled us and the bean that I picked had no smell and I could tell that is was the good bean.The taste of my bean was delicious and sweet.The sounds I could hear when people first tasted their beans was eww and yum.


Whaea Raewyn gave the bowl of beans to Lorrell and Lorrell past it on to Amber and Amber past it onto Ella I was after Ella the bowl went around the circle.


When everyone got their beans the teacher The first bean I smelt like it had no smell and that’s how I knew that it was a good bean.I also knew that my bean was the good one because my friends had the same and their beans smelt like toe jams.
My other friends had pink ones but theirs did not stink like toe jams.


https://c1.staticflickr.com/3/2949/15173630108_057a600e98_b.jpgThe taste of my bean was sweet and yum because the flavour I had was tutti-fruitti.The taste of my bean was kind of sour but more sweet and salty.I thought the taste of my bean was yuck at first and then i realised I was thinking it was.


said put them in your mouth.Everyone put them in their mouth and the first sound I heard was eeew and oooo but the last sound I heard was stomping half the class ran outside to have a drink.


When everyone came inside we all talked about the taste of our beans some people said “It tasted like dead fish or rotten egg”.I said it tasted like sweet fruit. Then we got told to write this story that was how my morning started with the bean boozled challenge…    By Jordashay      






Friday, 14 October 2016

My holidays

MY HOLIDAYS…

In the holidays me and my family were cleaning the rooms because we are moving soon.We want our house to be clean for people that want to buy our house.So while we were cleaning we heard the phone ring my step mum when and answered the phone and it was my mum.So i ran out the lounge and snatched the phone out of her hand and said hello so we talked a lot lets just say blah blah blah...then she said that me my cousin and my sister are going to be at the movies by ourselves. In the morning i jumped out of  bed and i was getting all excited about the movies, then we talked some more so i went to sleep and when i woke up i jumped out of bed with a spring in my step cause my mum was coming to pick me up.So i had breaky did my hair packed my bag and cleaned the room,first i got dressed Next me and my cousins went outside to play a game, juring our game we all got hungry so we raced inside faster and hungrier then ever before,I was the first person to touch the door so i slowly opened it and boom i could smell the delicouse smell of chips and dip so i raced to the fridge opened it up and there it was the dip.My mouth was watery  i was just about to grab it until i heard beep beep and i looked outside and it was my mum,so i ran out side and gave her a big hug and i quickly ran inside grabbed my bag,now we were on our way to whangarei i was really tired so i had a big sleep and when we got to my mums house i woke up and went inside to play on PS4 i raced to the controller and that night i went to sleep at 6 in morning and i had like a 1 hour sleep and woke up and everyone was still asleep so i stayed up tired as waiting to go to the movies the minute i was closing my eyes everbody woke so i got dressed and i was ready to go.We were on our way to the movies and while we were waiting i almost dropped my ice-cream why? you ask why? Because i was falling to sleep and finally the movie was about to start so i sat up and watched well at least for a bit cause i was falling asleep and these old-ladies were annoying me cause they were talking through the whole thing but anyways i still slept through some of it,Finally it was time to go home and have a sleep.

THE END...Thank you for reading.